Environment Sketches

 Got to this stage in the environment painting and wanted feedback because I feel like a really struggle finding a focal point in an environment piece so It just looks all over the place.

This is what I was told via feedback would help my image. There is less in the image pulling attention so the eye follows the edge of the crevice around the image so it has better readability. The front left is blurred to guide the eye into the image and to avoid pulling focus.






I think the obelisks are too level on the image but this can easily be changed.